Hello
Your card is not very well. The drawing is not very beautiful and the writings are hardly readable. The legend is not clear and the symbols are not easy to see and to understand.
I am sure you can do better.
Good luck!
Good bye
bonjour !
votre anglais est super mais je pense que tu pourrais juste justifiez ca : card n’est pas le bon mot map serrais mieux et card n’est pas approprie pour sa
et aussi a la place de »The drawing is not very beautiful » tu pourrais dire genre »The drawing is not very nice » sa serrais mieux mais sinon c tres bien
good job !
Thank you very much for taking on the challenge of commenting in English! You have made a very good job at it!
Your comment is very well written and there are almost no mistakes. One of them is that you put « card » instead of « map » and the other one is that, in English, we do not say « your card not is very well » but « your map is not realized very well ». Except for that it was perfect.
Great job!
Stay safe and have a nice day!
Maxime
hello,
I find your cards are not very well present, but there are some elements. the writing cannot be seen well. coloring and not very well done.
good luck and good luck to you
bonjour !
ton commentaire est assez bien mais a la place de dire » it is bad to draw » tu pourrais dire » The drawing is not very nice » comme je l’ai fait remarque a ton ami tout a l’heure c’est tout ! ( mais je parle pas beaucoup anglais doc je ne sais pas beaucoup corriger desole )
good job 1
Hello!
I think your card is quite well. The coloring is cleare and there is a lot of information in the legend. But I can’t see and understand the writing.
Good luck to you!
Hello,
You didn’t focus on coloring. In addition you did not make a compass rose. IT’s is too bad because from what I understood from your map (and those of others) the geography of your territory is a little bit strange.
Now the informations. I couldn’t read your caption . Those for two reasons. The scan was difficult to read . But I don’t blame you for this point as it’s not your fault, however the writing of the person who wrote is difficult for me to read. My opinion is that it would have been better to do your caption on a computer . Also, you did not put the names of the countries next to them, which does not allow us to locate ourselves in space. You tried to highlight the main rivers, which is a good thing But you did not name it, also for the cities On your legend I saw a double red arrow but I did not see again on the map Finally I did not understand how your territory fits into globalization.It gives the feeling that your map is not finished Here are the negative points
On the bright side, there’s the fact that your background colors don’t mix and your map isn’t too full.
Good luck for the future.
Thank you very much for taking on the challenge of commenting in English! I have no idea of your English level but just from reading your comment, I can see that I guess, you are bilingual. There is absolutely no mistake and the way you write feels like you’ve done this for long.
Amazing job!
Stay safe and have a nice day!
Maxime
bonjour !
votre anglais est super mais a la place de card , map serrais mieux et je pense que c’est tout (je ne parle pas beaucoup donc je ne vois pas forcement encore les fautes )
bravo !
Hello
Your map is good but,
your coloring is not very pretty, the legend is not legible and there is too little information,
there is no compass rose and we do not see the main cities and the capital city.
Good Luck
bonjour !
votre angllais est super juste une chose a la place de mettre »your coloring is not pretty » tu pourrais dire »your coloring is not very careful » et je crois que c’est tout ! (je ne parle pas beaucoup donc je ne vois pas forcement encore les fautes )
good job !
Hy,
Your maps is very Bad because your drawing is not good and your Wrighting is hardly reable .The legend is very very Bad ,it is very impossible a drawing Hello,
You didn’t focus on coloring. In addition you did not make a compass rose. IT’s is too bad because from what I understood from your map (and those of others) the geography of your territory is a little bit strange.
Now the informations. I couldn’t read your caption . Those for two reasons. The scan was difficult to read . But I don’t blame you for this point as it’s not your fault, however the writing of the person who wrote is difficult for me to read. My opinion is that it would have been better to do your caption on a computer . Also, you did not put the names of the countries next to them, which does not allow us to locate ourselves in space. You tried to highlight the main rivers, which is a good thing But you did not name it, also for the cities On your legend I saw a double red arrow but I did not see again on the map Finally I did not understand how your territory fits into globalization.It gives the feeling that your map is not finished Here are the negative points
On the bright side, there’s the fact that your background colors don’t mix and your map isn’t too full.
Good luck for the future.👋
Hello,
I don’t can read your key but it’s too small. Your colour is not good do. Your map haven’t got a compass rose. You write not a name of the country around.
It’s good, You set a colour in your map.
Good day
Sidonie
Hello !
Your maps is not clean.
For me he’s not beautiful because you don’t written very well… And your coloring is horrible.
Good Luck for the futur but I think than there isn’t .
Hello !!
I find that your map is not very beautiful. Then the coloring and the legend are not clan. I dont understand the choice of colors.
Bye and good luck for the futur !!
Hello,
I find your map good but the legend is very badly colored and badly wirtten otherwise its good .
The card has very little filled there are only colors everything is done very quickly .
Hi 🙂
There is not too much information and the writing is very small… but it still good !
It’s not easy to make a map (especially the first one) but you did well !!! 😀
It will still be necessary to improve a few points…
I think your map is good but the coloring could be done better. Your legend is not readable already because it is not in good form and the writing is not distinctive, too bad. ^~^ your figures do not appear on the map (maybe I’m wrong 😅). There is also no compass rose
I wish you good luck !!! 😁 Bye !
Hello,
I don’t really like your map because it is not pleasant to read.
The coloring of the map is poorly done and the writing of the caption is difficult to read. You could have taken more time to apply yourself.
I can’t see the different shades of blue on the map, so it’s difficult to understand what you wanted to show.
You forgot to make a compass rose.
A good point in your caption: there are three parts and a lot of informations. You forgot to put a title on your card.
You made a red arrow in the legend but it does not appear on the map.
You have not noted anything on your card : neither the name of certain towns nor the neighboring countries ; it’s missing.
Good luck for the future.
Thank you very much for taking on the challenge of commenting in English!
Your comment is very well written and there are almost no mistakes. Just by reading it, I feel like you are a fluent speaker. The only mistake I can see is when you put « card » instead of « map ».
Great job!
Stay safe and have a nice day!
Maxime
Hello,
I don’t like very much your map. The coloring is not realy good. I can’t read the legend. Your map is a littel bit empty. The borders are well delimited .
Hello
your map is not detailed enough, the coloring is badly done and the colors are badly chosen. the legend is illegible and poorly written, good luck
I think your legend is good but I find that your map is lacking in color.
Hello
Your card is not very well. The drawing is not very beautiful and the writings are hardly readable. The legend is not clear and the symbols are not easy to see and to understand.
I am sure you can do better.
Good luck!
Good bye
bonjour !
votre anglais est super mais je pense que tu pourrais juste justifiez ca : card n’est pas le bon mot map serrais mieux et card n’est pas approprie pour sa
et aussi a la place de »The drawing is not very beautiful » tu pourrais dire genre »The drawing is not very nice » sa serrais mieux mais sinon c tres bien
good job !
Thank you very much for taking on the challenge of commenting in English! You have made a very good job at it!
Your comment is very well written and there are almost no mistakes. One of them is that you put « card » instead of « map » and the other one is that, in English, we do not say « your card not is very well » but « your map is not realized very well ». Except for that it was perfect.
Great job!
Stay safe and have a nice day!
Maxime
Your map is very rough, the same for the legend, the coloring is very poorly done, there is not much information on the map
Good luck to you !
hello
its not a good card. the legend is not good and its not lisible and not good coloriage. not assez information.
good continuation.bye
hello,
I find your cards are not very well present, but there are some elements. the writing cannot be seen well. coloring and not very well done.
good luck and good luck to you
Hello
The idea of the colors is good but it is bad to draw
Good luck👏👏
bonjour !
ton commentaire est assez bien mais a la place de dire » it is bad to draw » tu pourrais dire » The drawing is not very nice » comme je l’ai fait remarque a ton ami tout a l’heure c’est tout ! ( mais je parle pas beaucoup anglais doc je ne sais pas beaucoup corriger desole )
good job 1
Hello!
I think your card is quite well. The coloring is cleare and there is a lot of information in the legend. But I can’t see and understand the writing.
Good luck to you!
Hello,
You didn’t focus on coloring. In addition you did not make a compass rose. IT’s is too bad because from what I understood from your map (and those of others) the geography of your territory is a little bit strange.
Now the informations. I couldn’t read your caption . Those for two reasons. The scan was difficult to read . But I don’t blame you for this point as it’s not your fault, however the writing of the person who wrote is difficult for me to read. My opinion is that it would have been better to do your caption on a computer . Also, you did not put the names of the countries next to them, which does not allow us to locate ourselves in space. You tried to highlight the main rivers, which is a good thing But you did not name it, also for the cities On your legend I saw a double red arrow but I did not see again on the map Finally I did not understand how your territory fits into globalization.It gives the feeling that your map is not finished Here are the negative points
On the bright side, there’s the fact that your background colors don’t mix and your map isn’t too full.
Good luck for the future.
Thank you very much for taking on the challenge of commenting in English! I have no idea of your English level but just from reading your comment, I can see that I guess, you are bilingual. There is absolutely no mistake and the way you write feels like you’ve done this for long.
Amazing job!
Stay safe and have a nice day!
Maxime
Hello the map is good despite that the legend is too small but correct
good continuation
hi your card is cruelly lacking in colors and your lack of visibility but you have answered your problematic goodbye and good luck
bonjour !
votre anglais est super mais a la place de card , map serrais mieux et je pense que c’est tout (je ne parle pas beaucoup donc je ne vois pas forcement encore les fautes )
bravo !
hello!
i think your card is good but it is not too bad but it is lacke maybe information? But, it is colorful ^^
good luck for the future!
*your card is good. It is not too bad but it is lacke maybe information
Hello
Your map is good but,
your coloring is not very pretty, the legend is not legible and there is too little information,
there is no compass rose and we do not see the main cities and the capital city.
Good Luck
bonjour !
votre angllais est super juste une chose a la place de mettre »your coloring is not pretty » tu pourrais dire »your coloring is not very careful » et je crois que c’est tout ! (je ne parle pas beaucoup donc je ne vois pas forcement encore les fautes )
good job !
Hy,
Your maps is very Bad because your drawing is not good and your Wrighting is hardly reable .The legend is very very Bad ,it is very impossible a drawing Hello,
You didn’t focus on coloring. In addition you did not make a compass rose. IT’s is too bad because from what I understood from your map (and those of others) the geography of your territory is a little bit strange.
Now the informations. I couldn’t read your caption . Those for two reasons. The scan was difficult to read . But I don’t blame you for this point as it’s not your fault, however the writing of the person who wrote is difficult for me to read. My opinion is that it would have been better to do your caption on a computer . Also, you did not put the names of the countries next to them, which does not allow us to locate ourselves in space. You tried to highlight the main rivers, which is a good thing But you did not name it, also for the cities On your legend I saw a double red arrow but I did not see again on the map Finally I did not understand how your territory fits into globalization.It gives the feeling that your map is not finished Here are the negative points
On the bright side, there’s the fact that your background colors don’t mix and your map isn’t too full.
Good luck for the future.👋
Hello,
I don’t can read your key but it’s too small. Your colour is not good do. Your map haven’t got a compass rose. You write not a name of the country around.
It’s good, You set a colour in your map.
Good day
Sidonie
Hello !
Your maps is not clean.
For me he’s not beautiful because you don’t written very well… And your coloring is horrible.
Good Luck for the futur but I think than there isn’t .
Hello,
The colors of the map are well chosen but the legend and the map are not readable. I also can’t see the items on the map.
Good luck !!
Hello !!
I find that your map is not very beautiful. Then the coloring and the legend are not clan. I dont understand the choice of colors.
Bye and good luck for the futur !!
Hello ,
your map is not very pretty and colors are ugly .
Your legend is illegible.
Bye.
Hello,
I find your map good but the legend is very badly colored and badly wirtten otherwise its good .
The card has very little filled there are only colors everything is done very quickly .
Good continuation .
Hi 🙂
There is not too much information and the writing is very small… but it still good !
It’s not easy to make a map (especially the first one) but you did well !!! 😀
It will still be necessary to improve a few points…
Good luck and have a good day, bye
I think your map is good but the coloring could be done better. Your legend is not readable already because it is not in good form and the writing is not distinctive, too bad. ^~^ your figures do not appear on the map (maybe I’m wrong 😅). There is also no compass rose
I wish you good luck !!! 😁 Bye !
HI
your map is very good.
BUT:
it lack of colors and I find that the writings of the legend are very small and the card is not sufficiently filled.
but otherwise the card is fine.
Hello
Your Map is butifull but thé legende is not very good.
See you soin.
Bye
Hello,
I don’t really like your map because it is not pleasant to read.
The coloring of the map is poorly done and the writing of the caption is difficult to read. You could have taken more time to apply yourself.
I can’t see the different shades of blue on the map, so it’s difficult to understand what you wanted to show.
You forgot to make a compass rose.
A good point in your caption: there are three parts and a lot of informations. You forgot to put a title on your card.
You made a red arrow in the legend but it does not appear on the map.
You have not noted anything on your card : neither the name of certain towns nor the neighboring countries ; it’s missing.
Good luck for the future.
Thank you very much for taking on the challenge of commenting in English!
Your comment is very well written and there are almost no mistakes. Just by reading it, I feel like you are a fluent speaker. The only mistake I can see is when you put « card » instead of « map ».
Great job!
Stay safe and have a nice day!
Maxime
Hello,
I don’t like very much your map. The coloring is not realy good. I can’t read the legend. Your map is a littel bit empty. The borders are well delimited .
Good luck !!
Hello
Hello,
your map is a shame that the coloring was done quickly and the legend is not too legible, shame. I wish you good luck for the future
Hello
your map is not detailed enough, the coloring is badly done and the colors are badly chosen. the legend is illegible and poorly written, good luck