Jamaïque Dallas

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  1. Jade de Trélazé

    👋Hi👋
    we start with your
    ✅positive point✅
    →Your legend is correct , elle est bien organisée
    →Your legend is de même taille👍
    →City names are horizontal to the map
    →Les figurés sont de même taille que la légende
    → you are everything correct👍
    —————————————-
    your
    ❌Negative point ❌
    ▹you haven’t got  » Negative point »
    ——————————————–
    ✨Tips ✨
    ↣Continuer comme ça!!!!
    ———————————————
    👋goodbye👋
    And GOOD LUCK!👍

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  2. Ambre J de Trélazé

    hello
    ✅ POSITIVE POINT : ✅
    – your map is clean
    – there are a lot of informations
    – la légende est du même format que la carte
    – your map is clear and beauitiful

    ❌ NEGATIVE POINT : ❌
    – the colors of the map are much ( claires: in french )
    – no title

    💡 CONSEILS : 💡
    – plus appuyer sur le crayons de couleurs
    – write the title

    goodbye good luck for the future 👍

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  3. Mélissa de Trélazé

    Hello,

    ✅THE POSITIVE POINTS :✅
    -there are lot of infomation
    -la carte est de la même taille que la légende
    -la légende et bien organisé en plusieurs partie

    ❌THE NEGATIVE POINTS :❌
    -there is no title
    -the map is difficult to read
    -the color is difficult to read
    -missing information
    -information écrites dans la légende mais pas sur la carte

    📌ADVICE :📌
    -write cities in blue
    -utiliser un normographe
    -appuyer plus sur les figurés surfacique

    Here’s for your goodbye card and good luck to you. 👋

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  4. Ambre A de Trélazé

    👋hello👋
    ✅ THE POSITIVE POINTS ✅
    ✔️Your map is clean
    ✔️Your map of the same size as the legend
    ✔️There are a lot of information
    ✔️The legend is well organized into several parts
    ✔️Your map is clear
    ❌THE NEGATIVE POINTS❌
    ✖️There is no title
    ✖️The map is difficult a read
    ✖️The city are write in blue
    ✖️Il y a des figurées ponctuel jaune
    ✖️The color is difficult a read
    💡ADVICE💡
    📌press more on the color
    📌use a normographe
    📌use only the colors red,Green,black and blue to the figurées ponctuel
    📌write the city in black
    Good bye, good luck 👋

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  5. Adrianna Trélazé

    Hello, I’m sorry if my English is not corecte but I will try to speak as best I can.😊👋
    __________________________________________________________________________________________________
    ✅THE POSSITIVE POINTS ✅
    ✔There is color
    ✔The figures are well chosen
    ✔The map is of the same format as the legend
    ✔The legend is orgnized in 3 parts
    ✔The nomenclature is establised horizontally
    ✔You made the legend on the computer
    _____________________________________________________
    ❌THE NEGATIVE POINTS❌
    ✖The map and legend have no title
    ✖There is a lack of information
    ✖The map is difficult to read
    ✖The color is not legible
    ✖You had not used the normograph
    __________________________________________________
    💡TIPS💡
    ✨Use a normograph for figures
    ✨Press the color pencils harder
    ✨Title legend and map
    ✨Put more information
    _______________________________________
    GOODBYE AND GOOD LUCK FOR THE FUTURE👋

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    1. Noah de trèlazé

      👋we start with your👋
      ✅positive point✅
      →Your legend is correct , elle est bien organisée
      →Your legend is de même taille👍
      →City names are horizontal to the map
      →Les figurés sont de même taille que la légende
      → you are everything correct👍
      —————————————-
      your
      ❌Negative point ❌
      ▹you haven’t got  » Negative point »
      ——————————————–
      💥Tips 💥
      ↣Continuer comme ça!!!!
      ———————————————
      goodbye👋
      And GOOD LUCK👍!

      Bonne chance pour la suite

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  6. rayan de trelaze

    hiii🌚
    🌚points positifs
    🌚your map is clean
    🌚there are a lot of information
    🥶 points negatifs
    🥶in the map there is no title
    🥶I can’t see your colors
    BYEEE
    I’M SORRY FOR THE SPELLING MISTAKES😊

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  7. Anonyme

    Hello👋🏻
    📈Positive points📈
    👍🏻Your map is clean👍🏻
    👍🏻There is colors👍🏻
    👍🏻 The legend is orgnized in 3 parts👍🏻
    📉negative points📉
    👎🏻No have negative points👎🏻
    🤌🏻 Tips🤌🏻
    🤌🏻 Use 1 normograph for figures
    🤌🏻 press more on the color
    🤌🏻Writh city in black
    Continued is ´´et bon courage ´´👋🏻

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  8. Esteban de Trélazé

    Hello, 👋
    ============================================================================================================================================================================================================================================
    ✅THE POSSITIVE POINTS ✅
    ✔The nomenclature is establised horizontally.
    ✔The figures are well chosen.
    ✔The map is of the same format as the legend.
    ✔The legend is orgnized in 3 parts.
    ✔There is color.
    ✔You made the legend on the computer.
    ============================================================================================================================================================================================================================================
    ❌THE NEGATIVE POINTS❌
    ✖There is a lack of information.
    ✖You had not used the normograph.
    ✖The map and legend have no title.
    ✖The color is not legible.
    ✖The map is difficult to read.
    ============================================================================================================================================================================================================================================
    💡TIPS💡
    ✨Press the color pencils harder.
    ✨Title legend and map.
    ✨Use a normograph for figures.
    ✨Put more information.
    ============================================================================================================================================================================================================================================
    GOODBYE AND GOOD LUCK FOR THE FUTURE👋

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  9. Aylan trelaze

    👋Hello👋
    ✅positive points of the legend✅
    -the title is present.
    -the legend is well written.
    -it’s good that the legend is divided into three parts.
    -there are lot of information.
    ___________________________________
    ✅positive points of the card✅
    -the figures are all of the same format.
    -the writing is fun to read.
    -there are colors.
    -the map is very well organized.
    ___________________________________
    ❌negative points of the legend❌
    -the legend is very well parties
    -negative points of the map.
    -no title on the map.
    -the color is diffcult to read.
    -the map is difficult to read.
    ___________________________________
    👋Good bye👋
    Good luck for the future.

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  10. tom de trelaze

    hello 🖐
    _____________
    positive points ✅
    – the legend is readable
    – a lot of information is indicated on the map
    – the title appears well on the map
    _________________________
    negative points ❌
    -there are linear figures that pass over the names of cities and this makes them invisible
    ______________
    good bye

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  11. Inaya de Trélazé

    👋🏽heyy👋🏽
    _____________
    positive points ✅
    – the legend is readable
    – a lot of information is indicated on the map
    -the writing is fun to read.
    -the map is very well organized.
    _________________________________
    negative points ❌
    -there are linear figures that pass over the names of cities and this makes them invisible
    ————————————-
    GOOD BYYEEEE 👋🏽

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  12. Dina de trelaze

    Hello,
    ………positifs points………..
    •The légende is readable
    • the figures are well chosen
    • The legend is organized
    • there is color
    • there are lot of imformation
    • there is a title for the legend
    ======négatifs points========
    •on titre on the Map
    •the color not very readable
    •the map is difficult to read
    #########conseils##########
    •press the colored pencil
    ——————————
    Good bye,
    Bonne chance pour la suite

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  13. Léna de Trélazé

    Hello,
    ✅ The positifs points ✅ :
    Your map of the same size as the legend.
    The legend is well organized into severeal parts.
    Your map is clean.
    ❌ The négative points ❌ :
    The city are write in blue.
    There is no title.
    💡Advice 💡
    Press more on the color.
    Write the cities in black.
    Good bye and good luck for the future 👋🏼

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  14. shainna de trelaze

    『hello , I am sorry for my english 』
    ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
    positive point
    ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
    ☑︎the map and the legend are the same format
    ☑︎the legend is vert beautiful and very readable
    ☑︎the map is complete
    ☑︎cities are well located
    ☑︎In yellow it is well coloring
    ☑︎the caption is written in black
    ☑︎colors are well used
    ☑︎the figurative figures are the same size
    ☑︎the figuratives figures are well chosen
    ☑︎it’s well written
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    negative point
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    ☒brown and green is ilisible
    ❝❝❝❝❞❞❞❞
    ☉very nice menu
    ☉good luck with your next cards.
    ☉see you soon good continuations to you.

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  15. Léa de trélazé

    Hello
    ✔️positive point ✔️
    The map is readable
    There are 3 parts in the legend
    The card is beautiful and neat
    The figures are well respected
    ❌negative point❌
    We don’t see much of the colors
    ��advice��
    In the cities you could have done the opposite in the colors: the cities where there are the most inhabitants in red or there are fewer in orange and where there are still fewer in blue
    Goodbye
    Keep going

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  16. Théo de trelaze

    ✅positive point✅
    – your map is clean
    – there are a lot of informations – Your legend is correct
    ❌Negative point ❌
    – you haven’t got Negative point

    -Bonne chance 🙋‍♂️

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  17. Thylann de Trélazé

    Hello
    POSSITIVE POINTS ✅
    ✔The nomenclature is establised horizontally.
    ✔The figures are well chosen.
    ✔The map is of the same format as the legend.
    ✔The legend is orgnized in 3 parts
    NEGATIVE POINTS❌
    ✖The map and legend have no title
    ✖There is a lack of information
    ✖The map is difficult to read
    ADVICE :📌
    -write cities in blue
    -utiliser un normographe
    Au revoir

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