25 commentaires au sujet de « Bengale occidental – La Suze sur Sarthe »
izaline collège calypso
hello la carte ne manque pas d’information mais on peu améliorer le coloriage et l’écriture sur la carte.
Good luck for the future. 👍👍👏👏
Raphael et Mathys De La Suze ( fondateur de la carte)
merci pour votre réponse 😊
Enzo College Calypso
Helllo
your card is very beautiful and the legend is well organized the coloring is pretty and the symbols are well done
goodbye and good luck for the future
M.GIET (prof Calypso)
I think you have to say « map »instead fo « card » (using for credit card ou « cantine » card) ! Probably GoogleTranslate 😉
Mathys la Suze
Thanks for comment :3
mayliss college calypso
Hello
your card is well done but the color is missing the legend has
a good bay
Agnes Saulnier Houston
Hello!
This comment is really well written, but I would recommend improving the English tense so instead of writing « the color is missing the legend has » you could have said the legend is missing some color. Apart from that very good job!
Agnes
Maxime Collège Calypso
Hello,
Votre carte ne manque pas d’information mais elle manque de couleur
Good Luck for the future card
Good Bye
Mathys & rafouner
thank you for your comments
Aaron Calypso
Hello,
Your legend is clean and well organize, It can be seen that there were lots of research done.
The two negative points were the coloring and writing on the map which you need to work on.
Good luck for the future
Clémence Calypso
Hello,
You card is fine, the legend is well presented,it has a lot of information,thé coloring page lack of Care.
Goodbye and good Luck for the rest
Agnes Saulnier Houston
Hello!
I find your comment also very sweet but replace organize with organized and you are all good!
Have a good day!
Agnes
Marine collège calypso
Hello
Votre carte est bien faite il y a beaucoup d’informations dans la légende mais je pense qu’il en manque sur la carte
Good luck for the futur
Samantha.collège calypso
Hello ,
The card is well , the legende is complete but the coloring is missing .
Good luck for the future card.
maelys collège calypso
hello
your card is wel ,but the coloring is missing,but is great because your legende is complete
is incroyable
Anaïs collège calypso
Hello !
Your map is good! Congratulations !! The legend has a lot of information but the coloring would be best .
Good luck
Good bye
Léa Collège Calypso
Hello,
Your caption contains a lot of information and is very well organized,that’s good…
I think the coloring can be improved and so can the writing…
Congrulations and good luck for the future,
Goodbye.
Alexia collège Calypso
Hello,
I like your map, there is a lot of informations, it’s well organize. It is a good point !
And we can see your done a lot of reaserch!
But the coloring and writing could be a litle more clean.
Congratulation a good luck for the future !
Agnes Saulnier Houston
Hello!
As the two before you have a very caring comment but maybe next time instead of your done a lot of reaserch say you’ve done a lot of research.
Have an amazing day,
Agnes
Elodie Calypso
Hello,
Congratulations on the map it is very pretty, there is a lot of information and the visibility of the map could have been more visible.
Goodbye 👋
Eliot College Calypso
Hello,
There is some negatives points it’s coloring and writing on the map which you need to work on.
But this is clean and well done this is hard to get perfect
Good luck for after
Charlène Montreuil-Bellay
Bonjour,
Votre légende est bien réalisé, elle est propre, il y a plein d’informations. Le seul conseil que je vous donnerai serai d’améliorer le coloriage de la carte, mais sinon c’est super bien réaliser.
Good Luck.
Mathys & Raphaël
good morning
thank you for your comment
matheo college calypso
Hello,
There is some negatives points it’s coloring and writing on the map which you need to work on.
But this is clean and well done this is hard to get perfect
Good luck for after
noah college calypso
très bon travail
le point positif c’est que c’est très bien expliqué
le point négatif est que ce n’est pas soigner
hello la carte ne manque pas d’information mais on peu améliorer le coloriage et l’écriture sur la carte.
Good luck for the future. 👍👍👏👏
merci pour votre réponse 😊
Helllo
your card is very beautiful and the legend is well organized the coloring is pretty and the symbols are well done
goodbye and good luck for the future
I think you have to say « map »instead fo « card » (using for credit card ou « cantine » card) ! Probably GoogleTranslate 😉
Thanks for comment :3
Hello
your card is well done but the color is missing the legend has
a good bay
Hello!
This comment is really well written, but I would recommend improving the English tense so instead of writing « the color is missing the legend has » you could have said the legend is missing some color. Apart from that very good job!
Agnes
Hello,
Votre carte ne manque pas d’information mais elle manque de couleur
Good Luck for the future card
Good Bye
thank you for your comments
Hello,
Your legend is clean and well organize, It can be seen that there were lots of research done.
The two negative points were the coloring and writing on the map which you need to work on.
Good luck for the future
Hello,
You card is fine, the legend is well presented,it has a lot of information,thé coloring page lack of Care.
Goodbye and good Luck for the rest
Hello!
I find your comment also very sweet but replace organize with organized and you are all good!
Have a good day!
Agnes
Hello
Votre carte est bien faite il y a beaucoup d’informations dans la légende mais je pense qu’il en manque sur la carte
Good luck for the futur
Hello ,
The card is well , the legende is complete but the coloring is missing .
Good luck for the future card.
hello
your card is wel ,but the coloring is missing,but is great because your legende is complete
is incroyable
Hello !
Your map is good! Congratulations !! The legend has a lot of information but the coloring would be best .
Good luck
Good bye
Hello,
Your caption contains a lot of information and is very well organized,that’s good…
I think the coloring can be improved and so can the writing…
Congrulations and good luck for the future,
Goodbye.
Hello,
I like your map, there is a lot of informations, it’s well organize. It is a good point !
And we can see your done a lot of reaserch!
But the coloring and writing could be a litle more clean.
Congratulation a good luck for the future !
Hello!
As the two before you have a very caring comment but maybe next time instead of your done a lot of reaserch say you’ve done a lot of research.
Have an amazing day,
Agnes
Hello,
Congratulations on the map it is very pretty, there is a lot of information and the visibility of the map could have been more visible.
Goodbye 👋
Hello,
There is some negatives points it’s coloring and writing on the map which you need to work on.
But this is clean and well done this is hard to get perfect
Good luck for after
Bonjour,
Votre légende est bien réalisé, elle est propre, il y a plein d’informations. Le seul conseil que je vous donnerai serai d’améliorer le coloriage de la carte, mais sinon c’est super bien réaliser.
Good Luck.
good morning
thank you for your comment
Hello,
There is some negatives points it’s coloring and writing on the map which you need to work on.
But this is clean and well done this is hard to get perfect
Good luck for after
très bon travail
le point positif c’est que c’est très bien expliqué
le point négatif est que ce n’est pas soigner