Bengale occidental – La Suze sur Sarthe

25 commentaires au sujet de « Bengale occidental – La Suze sur Sarthe »

  1. izaline collège calypso

    hello la carte ne manque pas d’information mais on peu améliorer le coloriage et l’écriture sur la carte.
    Good luck for the future. 👍👍👏👏

  2. Enzo College Calypso

    Helllo

    your card is very beautiful and the legend is well organized the coloring is pretty and the symbols are well done

    goodbye and good luck for the future

    1. M.GIET (prof Calypso)

      I think you have to say « map »instead fo « card » (using for credit card ou « cantine » card) ! Probably GoogleTranslate 😉

    1. Agnes Saulnier Houston

      Hello!
      This comment is really well written, but I would recommend improving the English tense so instead of writing « the color is missing the legend has » you could have said the legend is missing some color. Apart from that very good job!
      Agnes

  3. Maxime Collège Calypso

    Hello,
    Votre carte ne manque pas d’information mais elle manque de couleur
    Good Luck for the future card
    Good Bye

  4. Aaron Calypso

    Hello,
    Your legend is clean and well organize, It can be seen that there were lots of research done.
    The two negative points were the coloring and writing on the map which you need to work on.
    Good luck for the future

    1. Clémence Calypso

      Hello,
      You card is fine, the legend is well presented,it has a lot of information,thé coloring page lack of Care.
      Goodbye and good Luck for the rest

    2. Agnes Saulnier Houston

      Hello!
      I find your comment also very sweet but replace organize with organized and you are all good!
      Have a good day!
      Agnes

  5. Marine collège calypso

    Hello
    Votre carte est bien faite il y a beaucoup d’informations dans la légende mais je pense qu’il en manque sur la carte
    Good luck for the futur

  6. Samantha.collège calypso

    Hello ,
    The card is well , the legende is complete but the coloring is missing .
    Good luck for the future card.

  7. maelys collège calypso

    hello
    your card is wel ,but the coloring is missing,but is great because your legende is complete
    is incroyable

  8. Anaïs collège calypso

    Hello !
    Your map is good! Congratulations !! The legend has a lot of information but the coloring would be best .
    Good luck
    Good bye

  9. Léa Collège Calypso

    Hello,
    Your caption contains a lot of information and is very well organized,that’s good…
    I think the coloring can be improved and so can the writing…
    Congrulations and good luck for the future,
    Goodbye.

  10. Alexia collège Calypso

    Hello,

    I like your map, there is a lot of informations, it’s well organize. It is a good point !
    And we can see your done a lot of reaserch!
    But the coloring and writing could be a litle more clean.

    Congratulation a good luck for the future !

    1. Agnes Saulnier Houston

      Hello!
      As the two before you have a very caring comment but maybe next time instead of your done a lot of reaserch say you’ve done a lot of research.
      Have an amazing day,
      Agnes

  11. Elodie Calypso

    Hello,
    Congratulations on the map it is very pretty, there is a lot of information and the visibility of the map could have been more visible.
    Goodbye 👋

  12. Eliot College Calypso

    Hello,
    There is some negatives points it’s coloring and writing on the map which you need to work on.
    But this is clean and well done this is hard to get perfect
    Good luck for after

  13. Charlène Montreuil-Bellay

    Bonjour,
    Votre légende est bien réalisé, elle est propre, il y a plein d’informations. Le seul conseil que je vous donnerai serai d’améliorer le coloriage de la carte, mais sinon c’est super bien réaliser.
    Good Luck.

  14. matheo college calypso

    Hello,
    There is some negatives points it’s coloring and writing on the map which you need to work on.
    But this is clean and well done this is hard to get perfect
    Good luck for after

  15. noah college calypso

    très bon travail
    le point positif c’est que c’est très bien expliqué
    le point négatif est que ce n’est pas soigner

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