23 commentaires au sujet de « Bengale occidental Beaufort A »
clemence DIS
Bonjour, votre carte est propre mais je n’arrive pas a lire l’ecriture, la carte est tres incomplete, je ne sais pas si ca bug mais je ne vois pas la legende non plu.
Bonne chance et bonne continuation 🙂
( je ne sais plu si il fallait la faire en francais ou en anglais donc je vais aussi faire en anglais)
Hello, your card is clean but I can not read the writing, the card is very incomplete, I do not know if it is lagging but I do not see the legend neither.
Good luck and good continuation:)
Hello, I think your map is very but very incomplete. You have only put the names of two or three cities and the name of the gulf and that’s it, not even the coloring is complete and careful. There is no legend.
Hello,
Your map is clean.
But it is incomplete, you forgot the legend, there is no compass rose, there is no title, I cannot read what you wrote, you map doesn’t answer the subject and I don’t know what the color brown means, are there mountains, is it an agricultural place ?
Here are a few advice: next time don’t forget the legend :), make sure that you are answering to the question that is asked, remember to add a title and a compass rose.
Good luck !
Hello,
Your map is very nice and the coloring is nice but,
There is no legend telling us what anything means, there is only one color, and no way to be able to read what is written on the map. With only one color it is difficult to figure out what it means, if it is wetland or plains. There is nothing telling us which way is north, and so i have to guess which way it is.
Good Luck!🙃
Hello,
Your map has a bit of color, but it is lacking a lot of information. There is no legend, and I can’t read your map. There is no compass rose, or title, and your map doesn’t answer the subject question at all. I hope that the next time you make a map you will take some of my corrections, and my classmate’s corrections.
Good luck! 🙂
Hi! Your card is colored well but the handwriting is hard to read, and there is no legend. There is no compas and no title. It doesn’t really correspond with the objective.
Thank you!
Hello,
Your map is clean but it’s incomplete. The legend is missing so there is no idea of knowing what anything is on the map. Also, there is only one color and no signs. There is no title also. The handwriting is hard to read and the coloring could have been better. There is no way of knowing which way is which so I don’t know which way is north also. Some things to add that could make it better are that you can make the coloring better. You can add the legend so we know what the brown goes to. There is only one color and no signs so you should add more information also.
Good Luck : )
Hello,
Your map is clean but very incomplete. The legend is missing so it gives us no idea of what everything is suppose to represent and/or be. The coloring is alright, but could be cleaner and neater. The handwriting is squished in a corner as well and is quite hard to read. Their could be a lot of stuff that would need to be added for this map to be complete. Another thing missing I have noticed is that you haven’t put any title or compass.
Overall you could have done better.
Good luck!
Hi,
The card is clean however, it is missing information to the point where it doesn’t have a legend. Only 1 color was used on the map. It does not have a title and there are no names of cities or lakes or anything. In my eyes it is a huge problem that this map doesn’t have a legend. The handwriting is alright, it could use improvement such as more names for the cities, rivers, a title , more colors etc. However; good job!
Hello!
I find your map is lacking many information. Even if it is neat, I find it very uninformative. Barely anything is marked on this besides a few cities. There is no legend telling us where anything is, even if there is nothing on the map. You haven’t been creative with your work at all, with the coloring, the information, the legend and even the title! Honestly, how much time did you take to make this? There is absolutely no effort put in this, unless you count the 6 things rapidly written. Otherwise, the map is clean and the handwriting is ok, but I still think you could do better. You should have spent more time on the map instead of doing it last minute just before it was due. It would be wayyy better if more color and information was integrated in your map.
Next time, please make sure you have actual info on this.
I wish you good luck for what’s to come next!
bye! : ) 😁😊
Your map is very incomplete. The coloring is very bland and it is poorly done, and the handwriting on the map is really hard to read. Even if there were any useful information on the map, there’s not even a legend to go with it. This is a huge problem for me! I don’t know if this was a mistake or not, but this is a major part of your work so it should absolutely be done. Overall, your work is very incomplete. Next time, try to put more effort into it.
Hello you map is very incomplete and the coloring is kind of sloppy and in the picture is very bright the handwriting is ok and overall you could have done a bit more research. And there is no legend
Good Luck
hello !
is good but your map is very incomplete next time try to put if there is a lot of inhabitants and especially more city and the coloring can be more careful!
good job !
Your map is very nice but there are a few things missing, it is not very colorful. You are missing the legend. It is also very hard for me to read your handwriting. I think you guys could have done better and wish you the best in the contest!
Your map isn’t very complete, you’re missing a lot of city names, the coloring is good but not the best and their isn’t a legend for the map, so it’s hard to know what everything means like the coloring in orange and the blue line. You’re missing a lot of details and information.
Try to be more careful with le legend and coloring otherwise,
Good luck for what’s next 🙂 .
Hello,
I wanted to start by saying that your map is incomplete, it lacks of informations, for example you did not place airports, rivers, plains etc. After it’s your map so you do what you want with it but it’s just a suggestion to make your map more complete next time. I also wanted to talk about the coloring, I am personally a very precise and perfectionist person and I was kinda disturbed, if I can say, to see that they were still blank spots through the color. I see that you guys put cities on your map but you are still missing a large amount of them. I am very disappointed to see that you have no legend. The legend is a crucial element which will give us information on your map. It is impossible for us to comprehend your map here because you do not have one. I would of apreciate it if next time you write more proprely, not to be offensive but we can see here that no effort have been made in the writting. Talking about writing, I also wanted to add that sometimes we can’t comprehend what you are writing. And finally you don’t have a compass rose which could have added more point to your grade.
Hello,
I think your map is not very well done.
First of all, the map has only one color, so how do you define which land it is? Secondly, the names of the cities are not very legible, and the cities are the only characters on the map, so there is not much information. And as for the legend, we can’t really talk about it because I don’t see it and it’s by reading the comments of my friends that I understand that nobody sees it. This does not mean that there are no qualities. There are, but the flaws are more important.
In spite of that, I am sure that you will manage to make good and beautiful cards.
Good luck and goodbye.
Bonjour, votre carte est propre mais je n’arrive pas a lire l’ecriture, la carte est tres incomplete, je ne sais pas si ca bug mais je ne vois pas la legende non plu.
Bonne chance et bonne continuation 🙂
( je ne sais plu si il fallait la faire en francais ou en anglais donc je vais aussi faire en anglais)
Hello, your card is clean but I can not read the writing, the card is very incomplete, I do not know if it is lagging but I do not see the legend neither.
Good luck and good continuation:)
Map* and not card sorry
Hello, I think your map is very but very incomplete. You have only put the names of two or three cities and the name of the gulf and that’s it, not even the coloring is complete and careful. There is no legend.
Hello,
Your map is clean.
But it is incomplete, you forgot the legend, there is no compass rose, there is no title, I cannot read what you wrote, you map doesn’t answer the subject and I don’t know what the color brown means, are there mountains, is it an agricultural place ?
Here are a few advice: next time don’t forget the legend :), make sure that you are answering to the question that is asked, remember to add a title and a compass rose.
Good luck !
Hello,
Your map is very nice and the coloring is nice but,
There is no legend telling us what anything means, there is only one color, and no way to be able to read what is written on the map. With only one color it is difficult to figure out what it means, if it is wetland or plains. There is nothing telling us which way is north, and so i have to guess which way it is.
Good Luck!🙃
Hello,
Your map has a bit of color, but it is lacking a lot of information. There is no legend, and I can’t read your map. There is no compass rose, or title, and your map doesn’t answer the subject question at all. I hope that the next time you make a map you will take some of my corrections, and my classmate’s corrections.
Good luck! 🙂
Hi! Your card is colored well but the handwriting is hard to read, and there is no legend. There is no compas and no title. It doesn’t really correspond with the objective.
Thank you!
Adam Sadek
Hello,
Your map is clean but it’s incomplete. The legend is missing so there is no idea of knowing what anything is on the map. Also, there is only one color and no signs. There is no title also. The handwriting is hard to read and the coloring could have been better. There is no way of knowing which way is which so I don’t know which way is north also. Some things to add that could make it better are that you can make the coloring better. You can add the legend so we know what the brown goes to. There is only one color and no signs so you should add more information also.
Good Luck : )
Hello,
Your map is clean but very incomplete. The legend is missing so it gives us no idea of what everything is suppose to represent and/or be. The coloring is alright, but could be cleaner and neater. The handwriting is squished in a corner as well and is quite hard to read. Their could be a lot of stuff that would need to be added for this map to be complete. Another thing missing I have noticed is that you haven’t put any title or compass.
Overall you could have done better.
Good luck!
Hi,
The card is clean however, it is missing information to the point where it doesn’t have a legend. Only 1 color was used on the map. It does not have a title and there are no names of cities or lakes or anything. In my eyes it is a huge problem that this map doesn’t have a legend. The handwriting is alright, it could use improvement such as more names for the cities, rivers, a title , more colors etc. However; good job!
Boly
Hello!
I find your map is lacking many information. Even if it is neat, I find it very uninformative. Barely anything is marked on this besides a few cities. There is no legend telling us where anything is, even if there is nothing on the map. You haven’t been creative with your work at all, with the coloring, the information, the legend and even the title! Honestly, how much time did you take to make this? There is absolutely no effort put in this, unless you count the 6 things rapidly written. Otherwise, the map is clean and the handwriting is ok, but I still think you could do better. You should have spent more time on the map instead of doing it last minute just before it was due. It would be wayyy better if more color and information was integrated in your map.
Next time, please make sure you have actual info on this.
I wish you good luck for what’s to come next!
bye! : ) 😁😊
Your map is very incomplete. The coloring is very bland and it is poorly done, and the handwriting on the map is really hard to read. Even if there were any useful information on the map, there’s not even a legend to go with it. This is a huge problem for me! I don’t know if this was a mistake or not, but this is a major part of your work so it should absolutely be done. Overall, your work is very incomplete. Next time, try to put more effort into it.
Good luck! :))
Hey,
I think your map is very detailed and good. You could maybe inprove on your handwriting.
Hello!
Your coloring is well done but the map is very incomplete. You are missing many things and your handwriting could improve.
Good luck!
Hello you map is very incomplete and the coloring is kind of sloppy and in the picture is very bright the handwriting is ok and overall you could have done a bit more research. And there is no legend
Good Luck
hello !
is good but your map is very incomplete next time try to put if there is a lot of inhabitants and especially more city and the coloring can be more careful!
good job !
I forgot my name sorry
Carla-Marie DIS **
Hey,
Your map is very nice but there are a few things missing, it is not very colorful. You are missing the legend. It is also very hard for me to read your handwriting. I think you guys could have done better and wish you the best in the contest!
Your map isn’t very complete, you’re missing a lot of city names, the coloring is good but not the best and their isn’t a legend for the map, so it’s hard to know what everything means like the coloring in orange and the blue line. You’re missing a lot of details and information.
Try to be more careful with le legend and coloring otherwise,
Good luck for what’s next 🙂 .
Hello,
I wanted to start by saying that your map is incomplete, it lacks of informations, for example you did not place airports, rivers, plains etc. After it’s your map so you do what you want with it but it’s just a suggestion to make your map more complete next time. I also wanted to talk about the coloring, I am personally a very precise and perfectionist person and I was kinda disturbed, if I can say, to see that they were still blank spots through the color. I see that you guys put cities on your map but you are still missing a large amount of them. I am very disappointed to see that you have no legend. The legend is a crucial element which will give us information on your map. It is impossible for us to comprehend your map here because you do not have one. I would of apreciate it if next time you write more proprely, not to be offensive but we can see here that no effort have been made in the writting. Talking about writing, I also wanted to add that sometimes we can’t comprehend what you are writing. And finally you don’t have a compass rose which could have added more point to your grade.
Good luck !
Hello,
I think your map is not very well done.
First of all, the map has only one color, so how do you define which land it is? Secondly, the names of the cities are not very legible, and the cities are the only characters on the map, so there is not much information. And as for the legend, we can’t really talk about it because I don’t see it and it’s by reading the comments of my friends that I understand that nobody sees it. This does not mean that there are no qualities. There are, but the flaws are more important.
In spite of that, I am sure that you will manage to make good and beautiful cards.
Good luck and goodbye.
Hi! I think the map looks a bit uncomplete as there are no legends or many colors. Other than that it’s fine 🙂