Greetings! You did an excellent job in taking the challenge to write in a different language you are used to!
Here are my corrections for you when translating in English.
– It would make more sense to put « Your map is very well done and easy to read »
– I’ve noticed you had putten « carte » instead of « map »
– For your last phrase maybe it would be more comprehendible if you had putten a coma after « I have nothing else to add »
Otherwise, you have done an excellent job in translating from French to English, Bravo!
Pauline
Hello,
to begin with I find that your map is really well done
************************************************** *****
POSITIVE POINTS🟢
the map is clean
the coloring is very neat
the writing is readable
the legend is typed on the computer
***************************************************
NEGATIVE POINTS🔴
the figures on the map are not in the normograph
there are names of cities that we see less well
the figures on the legend are made on the computer
**********************************************************
Congratulations on your map
good luck for the future
Bonjour,
pour commencer je trouve que votre carte est vraiment bien réalisée
*******************************************************
LES POINS POSITIFS🟢
la carte est propre
le coloriage est très soignée
l’ecriture est lisible
la legende est tapée a l’ordinateur
****************************************************
LES POINTS NEGATIFS🔴
les figurées sur la carte ne sont pas fait au normographe
il y a des noms de villes qu ‘on voit moins bien
les figurées sur la legende sont fait a l’ordinateur
**********************************************************
Bravo pour votre carte
bonne chance pour la suite
Hello,
THE POSITIVE POINTS:
-the card is legible
-the legend was made to the computer
-the figures are not made to the normograph
-the map is prope
THE NEGATIVE POINTS:
-some city name is not legible
congratulations on your card.
good luck for the future.
Hello! Your vocabulary and grammar are fantastic! There are just a few minor mistakes;
– In your second point instead of « to the » put « by »
– The third point (in the positive point) you must add, instead of « to the » put « with »
– « Propre » in English is « clean »
Although these are very minor mistakes, I congratulate you for taking on that challenge! Bravo!
Positive points
– the legend is complete
Negative points
– the figures are made on the computer and not the normograph
– there are some city names less readable than others
Hello,
GOOD POİNTS🙂:
-your card is clean
-the coloring is neat
-the legend is typed on the computer
-the legend has a title
-the legend is organized
_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–
NEGATİVE POİNTS🙁:
-the names of the cities are sometimes less legible
-the figures are not done in the normograph
-the figures on the legend are made by computer
_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–
Good continuation!!😊
Bonjour,
POİNTS POSİTİFS🙂 :
-Ta carte est propre
-le coloriage est soigné
-la légende est tapée à l’ordinateur
-la légende a un titre
-la légende est organisée
_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–
POİNTS NÉGATİFS🙁 :
-les noms des villes sont parfois moins lisibles.
-les figurées ne sont pas faits au normographe
-les figurées de la légende sont faits par ordinateur.
_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–
Bonne continuation !!😊
Hello,
POSITIVES POINTS 🙂:
-the legend is typed on the computer
-the legend has a title
-the map is colorful
-your map is clean
_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
NÉGATİVES POİNTS 🙁 :
-the figures are not made with the normograph
-the names of the cities are sometimes less legible
-card title is not right
_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
Good continuation !
Hellow
Well done for your map.
———————————
✔️POSITIVE POINTS ✔️:
-Your map is well colored.
-The legend is written on the computer.
The legend has several titles.
-Your map is clean
———————————————————-
❌NEGATIVE POINTS❌:
-The légende is made to pc.
-The figures are not made with the normograph.
-The name of ciiesare sometimes are less liglble.
———————————————————————
Good luck for the futur.
Salut
Bravo pour ta carte.
———————————
✔️POINTS POSITIFS ✔️ :
-Votre carte est bien colorée.
-La légende est écrite sur l’ordinateur.
La légende a plusieurs titres.
-Votre carte est propre
————————————————– ——–
POINTS NÉGATIFS❌ :
-La légende est faite sur pc.
-Les figurines ne sont pas faites avec le normographe.
-Les noms de villes sont parfois moin lisibles.
————————————————– ——————-
Bonne chance pour la suite.
Hello,
the positive points:
-your map is readable
-the legend is organized
the negative points:
the figures on the map are not made with the normograph
-There is some town that we cannot see very well
Good luck for the future!
les points positifs :
-la coloration est correcte
-la carte est intitulée
-l’écriture est lisible
-la légende est organisée
les points négatifs :
-certaines entrées ne sont pas lisibles
-les figurés ne sont pas faits à la main
-sur la carte, la plupart des figurés ne sont pas visibles
Mais malgré tout, votre carte est bonne
Au revoir.
Bonjours, votre carte est bien faite mais, il y a des défaut comme des qualité.
QUALITE:
-Les écriture de la carte est lisible.
-La légende est bien en quatre titre.
-La légende est titré.
-La légende est fait a l’ordinateur.
DEFAUT:
-Les figuré qui son sur la carte est la légende sont pas fait au normographe.
-Le titre de la légende est pas centré.
-Il a rajouté deux phrase dans la légende.
-Sur la carte il y a des nom qui est pas lisible.
En générale la carte est bien faite, mais il y a quelque défaut aurevoir merci.
THE POSITIVE POINTS✅:
-the legend is complete
-coloring is clean
-the caption is typed on the computer
-the legend has a title
-the card is clean
●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●
THE NEGATIVE POINTS❌
-the legendary figure is typed on the computer
-there are more than three left in the legend
●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●
Your card is vers nice and clean
Good luck for the future
Hello, your card is well made but, there are defects as well as quality.
QUALITY:
-The writing of the card is readable.
-The legend is well in four titles.
-The legend is titled.
-The legend is made to the computer.
DEFECT:
-The figures that sound on the map is the legend are not made to the normograph.
-The title of the legend is not centered.
-He added two sentences in the caption.
-On the map there are names that are not legible.
In general the map is well made, but there is some defect goodbye thank you.
Hello the positives: the légend is organized the coloring is correct the negatives:figures are not handmade the figures are not visible. Good continuation Good bye
The positifs points are
-the caption is to type on the computer
it has a wind rose
the negative points are
figuring them on the map is not done by the normographer
the writing is sometimes illegible
your card is superb for a first
Ce commentaire de Nicéphore ne doit pas être pris en compte dans la sélection des super commentaires puisqu’il a réalisé la carte de la semaine pour Trélazé.
Hello,
THE POSITIVE POINTS:
-the card is legible
-the legend was made to the computer
-the figures are not made to the normograph
-the map is prope
THE NEGATIVE POINTS:
-some city name is not legible
congratulations on your card.
good luck for the future.
Hello,
Excellent job in translating, just a couple of mistakes when translating from French to English.
– In some sentences, you wrote « card » instead of the English translation « map »
– Prope -> Clean
-« The legend was made using the computer » instead of « the legend was made to the computer »
Although there are a few tiny mistakes. Wonderful job!
Hello,
well done for your card
******************
the positive points:
-the legend is to heal
-the writing is clearly legible
-There is a lot of information in the legend
******************
the negative points;
-the legend is not in three parts
– some city name is not very readable
******************
well done and see you soon maybe
hello
positifs points
-the legend is very organised
-the legend is complete
-map is clean
negative points
-the figure on the map are not on the normographer
goodbye
hello
THE POSITIF POINT :
– the map is car
– the legend is to type on the computer
-coloring is also good car
THE NEGATIF POINT :
– the figures are not made with the normograph
– the names of the cities are sometimes less legible
good luck for the first
Hello!
I applause you for giving your best effort in translating in English! You have done a few minor mistakes and here there are;
– I think you meant « The map is clean » instead of « car »
– It would be more comprehensible to say « the legend is typed using a computer »
– Delete the « car » in « coloring is also good car »
Besides these minor mistakes, congratulations on translating in English!
Pauline
hello the positif point are is has a wind or organized the coloring perfect point negatif figurien them on se map, is not done by the normographe the ringting is sometimes illegible the legend is titled your card is superb for a first good bye
Hello,
_____________________________________________________
The positive points :
-clean and neat coloring
– the legend was made on the computer
-the legende is complete
______________________________________________________
The negative point :
-the title is not made on the computer
______________________________________________________
Bonjour,
Déjà bravo pour cette carte elle est magnifique !
✅ LES POINTS POSITIFS ✅ :
– Votre carte est très soignée et lisible
– La légende est très bien organisée
– La carte et la légende sont complètes
❌ LES POINTS NÉGATIFS ❌ :
– Quelque nom des villes sont un peu loin lisible que d’autre
Franchement j’ai pas d’autres chose à rajouter votre carte est très très bien réussi !
Bonne chance pour la suite
Hello,
Already, well done for you map she is beautiful !
THE POSITIVE POINTS :
– Your map is very to care
– The légend is very organised
– The carte and the legend are complete
THE NEGATIVE POINTS :
– Some city name are a little less readable than others
I have nothing else to add your map is very sucessful
Good luck for the future
Greetings! You did an excellent job in taking the challenge to write in a different language you are used to!
Here are my corrections for you when translating in English.
– It would make more sense to put « Your map is very well done and easy to read »
– I’ve noticed you had putten « carte » instead of « map »
– For your last phrase maybe it would be more comprehendible if you had putten a coma after « I have nothing else to add »
Otherwise, you have done an excellent job in translating from French to English, Bravo!
Pauline
Hello,
to begin with I find that your map is really well done
************************************************** *****
POSITIVE POINTS🟢
the map is clean
the coloring is very neat
the writing is readable
the legend is typed on the computer
***************************************************
NEGATIVE POINTS🔴
the figures on the map are not in the normograph
there are names of cities that we see less well
the figures on the legend are made on the computer
**********************************************************
Congratulations on your map
good luck for the future
Bonjour,
pour commencer je trouve que votre carte est vraiment bien réalisée
*******************************************************
LES POINS POSITIFS🟢
la carte est propre
le coloriage est très soignée
l’ecriture est lisible
la legende est tapée a l’ordinateur
****************************************************
LES POINTS NEGATIFS🔴
les figurées sur la carte ne sont pas fait au normographe
il y a des noms de villes qu ‘on voit moins bien
les figurées sur la legende sont fait a l’ordinateur
**********************************************************
Bravo pour votre carte
bonne chance pour la suite
Hello,
THE POSITIVE POINTS:
-the card is legible
-the legend was made to the computer
-the figures are not made to the normograph
-the map is prope
THE NEGATIVE POINTS:
-some city name is not legible
congratulations on your card.
good luck for the future.
Hello! Your vocabulary and grammar are fantastic! There are just a few minor mistakes;
– In your second point instead of « to the » put « by »
– The third point (in the positive point) you must add, instead of « to the » put « with »
– « Propre » in English is « clean »
Although these are very minor mistakes, I congratulate you for taking on that challenge! Bravo!
Hello,
Positive points
– the legend is complete
Negative points
– the figures are made on the computer and not the normograph
– there are some city names less readable than others
Good luck
Hello,
GOOD POİNTS🙂:
-your card is clean
-the coloring is neat
-the legend is typed on the computer
-the legend has a title
-the legend is organized
_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–
NEGATİVE POİNTS🙁:
-the names of the cities are sometimes less legible
-the figures are not done in the normograph
-the figures on the legend are made by computer
_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–
Good continuation!!😊
Bonjour,
POİNTS POSİTİFS🙂 :
-Ta carte est propre
-le coloriage est soigné
-la légende est tapée à l’ordinateur
-la légende a un titre
-la légende est organisée
_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–
POİNTS NÉGATİFS🙁 :
-les noms des villes sont parfois moins lisibles.
-les figurées ne sont pas faits au normographe
-les figurées de la légende sont faits par ordinateur.
_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–_–
Bonne continuation !!😊
Hello,
POSITIVES POINTS 🙂:
-the legend is typed on the computer
-the legend has a title
-the map is colorful
-your map is clean
_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
NÉGATİVES POİNTS 🙁 :
-the figures are not made with the normograph
-the names of the cities are sometimes less legible
-card title is not right
_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
Good continuation !
Hellow
Well done for your map.
———————————
✔️POSITIVE POINTS ✔️:
-Your map is well colored.
-The legend is written on the computer.
The legend has several titles.
-Your map is clean
———————————————————-
❌NEGATIVE POINTS❌:
-The légende is made to pc.
-The figures are not made with the normograph.
-The name of ciiesare sometimes are less liglble.
———————————————————————
Good luck for the futur.
Salut
Bravo pour ta carte.
———————————
✔️POINTS POSITIFS ✔️ :
-Votre carte est bien colorée.
-La légende est écrite sur l’ordinateur.
La légende a plusieurs titres.
-Votre carte est propre
————————————————– ——–
POINTS NÉGATIFS❌ :
-La légende est faite sur pc.
-Les figurines ne sont pas faites avec le normographe.
-Les noms de villes sont parfois moin lisibles.
————————————————– ——————-
Bonne chance pour la suite.
Hello,
the positive points:
-your map is readable
-the legend is organized
the negative points:
the figures on the map are not made with the normograph
-There is some town that we cannot see very well
Good luck for the future!
Hello,
the positives:
-coloring is correct
-the map is titled
-the writing is legible
-the legend is organized
the negatives:
-some entries are not legible
-figures are not handmade
-on the map, most of the figures are not visible
But despite everything, your card is good
Goodbye.
Bonjour,
les points positifs :
-la coloration est correcte
-la carte est intitulée
-l’écriture est lisible
-la légende est organisée
les points négatifs :
-certaines entrées ne sont pas lisibles
-les figurés ne sont pas faits à la main
-sur la carte, la plupart des figurés ne sont pas visibles
Mais malgré tout, votre carte est bonne
Au revoir.
Bonjours, votre carte est bien faite mais, il y a des défaut comme des qualité.
QUALITE:
-Les écriture de la carte est lisible.
-La légende est bien en quatre titre.
-La légende est titré.
-La légende est fait a l’ordinateur.
DEFAUT:
-Les figuré qui son sur la carte est la légende sont pas fait au normographe.
-Le titre de la légende est pas centré.
-Il a rajouté deux phrase dans la légende.
-Sur la carte il y a des nom qui est pas lisible.
En générale la carte est bien faite, mais il y a quelque défaut aurevoir merci.
Hello,
THE POSITIVE POINTS✅:
-the legend is complete
-coloring is clean
-the caption is typed on the computer
-the legend has a title
-the card is clean
●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●
THE NEGATIVE POINTS❌
-the legendary figure is typed on the computer
-there are more than three left in the legend
●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●
Your card is vers nice and clean
Good luck for the future
Hello, your card is well made but, there are defects as well as quality.
QUALITY:
-The writing of the card is readable.
-The legend is well in four titles.
-The legend is titled.
-The legend is made to the computer.
DEFECT:
-The figures that sound on the map is the legend are not made to the normograph.
-The title of the legend is not centered.
-He added two sentences in the caption.
-On the map there are names that are not legible.
In general the map is well made, but there is some defect goodbye thank you.
Hello the positives: the légend is organized the coloring is correct the negatives:figures are not handmade the figures are not visible. Good continuation Good bye
Hello,
The positifs points are
-the caption is to type on the computer
it has a wind rose
the negative points are
figuring them on the map is not done by the normographer
the writing is sometimes illegible
your card is superb for a first
Bonjour,
Les points positifs sont:
_La carte est très jolie
_La couleur est bien présente
_Beaucoup d’info sont disponibles
_La légende est soignée
Les points négatifs sont:
_La légende n’ai pas complètement fini
mais bravo comme même et au revoir
Ce commentaire de Nicéphore ne doit pas être pris en compte dans la sélection des super commentaires puisqu’il a réalisé la carte de la semaine pour Trélazé.
hello, negative poin is not asser title in the map and in the legend the information is not noted in the map. good luck for the future
bonjour, point négatif n’est pas asser titre dans la carte et dans la légende l’information n’est pas notée dans la carte. bonne chance pour la suite
Hello,
THE POSITIVE POINTS:
-the card is legible
-the legend was made to the computer
-the figures are not made to the normograph
-the map is prope
THE NEGATIVE POINTS:
-some city name is not legible
congratulations on your card.
good luck for the future.
Hello,
Excellent job in translating, just a couple of mistakes when translating from French to English.
– In some sentences, you wrote « card » instead of the English translation « map »
– Prope -> Clean
-« The legend was made using the computer » instead of « the legend was made to the computer »
Although there are a few tiny mistakes. Wonderful job!
Pauline Black
Hello,
THE POSITIVES POINTS:
-the legend is complete
-the legend is organised
-the map is colorful
THE NEGATIVE POINTS:
-the figure on the map are not made with the normographe
-the figures on the legend are made for computer
Good bye !
bonjours a tous ,
les point positif :
– la carte est bien représenter et lisible
– la légende est bien écrit est bien représenter
les point négatif :
– les figure de la légende ne sont pas fait au normographe
the positive points:
– the map is well represented and legible
– the legend is well written is well represented
the negative points:
– the figures in the legend are not made to the normograph
Hello,
well done for your card
******************
the positive points:
-the legend is to heal
-the writing is clearly legible
-There is a lot of information in the legend
******************
the negative points;
-the legend is not in three parts
– some city name is not very readable
******************
well done and see you soon maybe
hello
positifs points
-the legend is very organised
-the legend is complete
-map is clean
negative points
-the figure on the map are not on the normographer
goodbye
hello
THE POSITIF POINT :
– the map is car
– the legend is to type on the computer
-coloring is also good car
THE NEGATIF POINT :
– the figures are not made with the normograph
– the names of the cities are sometimes less legible
good luck for the first
Hello!
I applause you for giving your best effort in translating in English! You have done a few minor mistakes and here there are;
– I think you meant « The map is clean » instead of « car »
– It would be more comprehensible to say « the legend is typed using a computer »
– Delete the « car » in « coloring is also good car »
Besides these minor mistakes, congratulations on translating in English!
Pauline
hello the positif point are is has a wind or organized the coloring perfect point negatif figurien them on se map, is not done by the normographe the ringting is sometimes illegible the legend is titled your card is superb for a first good bye
Hello,
_____________________________________________________
The positive points :
-clean and neat coloring
– the legend was made on the computer
-the legende is complete
______________________________________________________
The negative point :
-the title is not made on the computer
______________________________________________________
Otherwise good job and good luck for the future 😉